tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7551540333468323896.post2031676666785692335..comments2023-04-28T00:31:54.009-07:00Comments on National Poetry Reading Month, 2011: cadaver dogs, Eating the tender thing that will not fillFeatherless Bipedhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02207055312949249371noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7551540333468323896.post-66668572242025564962011-07-03T21:23:53.980-07:002011-07-03T21:23:53.980-07:00Oh, my goodness, those diagrams are awesome and I ...Oh, my goodness, those diagrams are awesome and I love them! I especially love the fact that you are making a frowny face due to confusion, or possibly due to horror at the masculine martian meat chime above your head.<br /><br />I like Jake's reading of "brother" as "brother wolf/brother owl". I found that passage <i>comical</i>. (Perhaps I am secretly evil?)Featherless Bipedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02207055312949249371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7551540333468323896.post-7518159648703007532011-06-28T16:06:48.333-07:002011-06-28T16:06:48.333-07:00I would have to say I enjoyed your postmodern piec...I would have to say I enjoyed your postmodern piece of performance art, cum poetry analysis better than the poem. Fer sure dude.<br /><br />The first, eating the brother part reminds me of Hannibal the cannibal. I don't know wha the hell the mars meat chime is either.Jeanne Ghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17181102170152075577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7551540333468323896.post-20885999808129642562011-06-27T21:09:54.170-07:002011-06-27T21:09:54.170-07:00HAHHAHHAHAH! This is so cool Aric, your drawings ...HAHHAHHAHAH! This is so cool Aric, your drawings and the sharing of your process with Jake trying to understand Loudon's poetry. It makes me want to make dioramas out of shoeboxes like we used to do for book reports in grade school! I like what you are pulling from her poems and the meat chime is a compelling and difficult image. I'm totally enjoying how you're incorporating yourself as a reader.janelohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03554593027763532312noreply@blogger.com